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There are two pieces of advice that career around the writing world and,
it seems to me, often conflict with each other. We are advised to ‘write what
you would wish to read’ and, by the same advisor, ‘write for your readers’. On
the face of it, these two exhortations can either conflict or make perfect
partners. It depends, I think, on your reason for writing.
For me, they often conflict. Perhaps that’s because I write from
compulsion and as a way of expressing ideas, making the world aware of my
thoughts and opinions on a multitude of subjects. I write because, deep within
me, there’s a teacher, even a preacher, trying to get out. Of course, I have to
make the best effort to disguise my message without burying it, otherwise my
stories will come across as proselytising, and most readers have no wish to be
lectured to. A resistance I fully understand and share.
So, for me, the idea that I can write what I want to read whilst, at the
same time, writing for readers is fraught with difficulty. I love children and
the young, but I no longer live in their world and have no wish to do so, but
my favourite genre is one where it seems almost obligatory to write for young
adults. I’m talking about fantasy, of course.
I’m currently editing the second volume of a huge epic fantasy, so far
unpublished. My problem with the conflicting advice, then, is that I’m writing
very much for an adult readership, not for callow youths. I have something to
say about sex, nudity and the way in which organised religion has distorted the
human view of these two natural aspects of life. It seems to me that I can’t,
with any honesty, tackle these themes in a book made suitable for developing
minds. Not, that is, unless I’m prepared to cause offence to a large part of
the population.
Many adults, especially of a religious persuasion, consider discussion of
sex, reference to nudity, topics unsuitable for young minds. If I’m to develop
stories that do justice to the subjects, I need the freedom to be truthful in
my depiction, I need, under certain circumstances, the freedom to show events,
refer to actions, that might be considered obscene by many readers. Such freedom wouldn’t sit easily with most of
the religious community. Though I do note that most erotic literature is
produced by the US, a country with the highest number of Christian extremists.
(but that’s a matter for another time).
My dilemma, therefore, if I stick to the advice I read, is whether to
bowdlerise my story or whether to continue to make my tale open and honest, as
I’ve always done in the past. Except, it isn’t a dilemma for me. I will, as I
always have, take the route to honesty and if that reduces my readership,
offends some potential readers, even loses me followers and virtual friends, so
be it. Because, for me, honesty is what matters most. I’ll continue to write
the trilogy for adults but place a warning there to let parents know that, whilst
the content is not intended to be erotic, it does have many references to sex
and nudity. That’s my choice as a writer. Such honesty of purpose is essential
to me as an artist.
At the start of this piece, I suggested there were circumstances in which
both pieces of advice are apposite. If you write for money, if you see your
work as a product to be sold like cans of beans, then the advice to write for
your audience will naturally coincide with that to write what you would like to
read. Since your driving motivation will be entirely to do with numbers and
with sales. Naturally, as a would-be best-seller writer, you will gravitate
toward the subjects, style and language that will gain you maximum readership.
If you’re writing erotica, you can indulge in any form of sexual distortion
with impunity, knowing your readers will be eager to pursue their given
proclivities. If you write crime, you can choose the strand that allows as much
gore as you wish to portray. And if you write fantasy, you can include the
necessary elves, dragons, magicians and, apparently much-lauded thieves,
without ever worrying such things might be considered bad influences on young
minds emerging into the adult world.
The choice is yours. To write for maximum readership. Or to write what
you would like to read. If you write to honestly suit your own tastes, the
former instruction is unlikely to apply. But if you write specifically as a way
to turn out the next block-buster, you will be obliged to make sure that your
writing conforms to certain rules and remains confined within specific
boundaries. I repeat; the choice is yours.
I’ve made mine. Have you made yours?
4 comments:
To borrow something you said Stuart - "making the world aware of my thoughts and opinions on a multitude of subjects" is why I write. I also write the kind of stories which appeal to me.
I incorporate my personal opinions on a range of subjects into most of my novels - we all do it. It is an inescapable fact that from our thoughts on various subjects comes the idea for that next novel.
I write because I like to combine things - research with fiction. I wrap stories around facts to do with music, art and literature. I must admit the market seems small.
It's no surprise to me, Jack, that you write about those things, ideas and philosophies that are of value to you. It's true that most of us incorporate our personal values into our fiction, but here are those who are motivated by purely financial considerations. I knew you wouldn't be one of them.
I suspect, Rosanne, that the market is actually every bit as large as it is for the best seller: the 'problem' for those of us whose writing is largely based in aspects of our choosing is that we generally don't attract the massive publicity and marketing campaigns that urges readers toward most of those 'best-sellers'. Nothing to do with taste, quality or worth, simply a reflection of the power of advertising. Good luck with your work.
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