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Certain words/phrases can induce fairly specific responses in readers. As
writers, we all know this, but do we use the power of emotion in our work?
For the next few weeks, I’ll be looking at something subjective: how to
choose between emotional and intellectual words for effect.
In this series I’m looking at the difference between words that seem
intellectual as opposed to those that invoke a more emotional response. How you
use them is obviously up to you. The point is that the alternatives have the
same, or very similar, meanings, but their effect upon the reader can be
markedly different. I’ve made some suggestions here, but I’m sure you can think
of others.
Intellectual: Astute
Emotional: Smart
The leader of the opposition made the astute point that the party in
power was run by fraudsters, millionaires, tax-dodgers and fools.
Georgina was not only beautiful, generous and smart as
a whip, she was also green.
Intellectual: Desire
Emotional: Hope
Members of the Tory party desire that all employees be made to labour for
inadequate wages so that they can continue to call them lazy and undeserving.’
Let’s all hope the majority of the electorate will wake up to the reality
of the right wing, in spite of the evidence that the contrary is usually the
case.
Intellectual: Obstinate
Emotional: Stubborn
The obstinate belief amongst the bulk of voters that politicians actually
care about them is difficult to comprehend.
My grandfather was a stubborn man who would argue that black was white if
that was what he chose to believe, regardless of fact.
