Writers choose locations
for their fiction for all manner of reasons. Sometimes it's because the place
is a familiar haunt. Sometimes the setting is exactly right for the fabric of
the story. Sometimes the landscape is so alien to the author that it stimulates
his imagination.
I grew up in Yorkshire and
it has been my home for much of my adult life, though by no means all of it.
Many years ago, when I was married to my first wife, in fact, (and I've been
married to my current lovely lady for coming up to 24 years) we were walking in
a particularly remote and rugged part of the Yorkshire Dales. There are some
sink holes in this area. For those who don't know, these are geological
features that are best described as vertical caves. Often quite deep, usually
narrow, they are places where water has eaten away the porous rock and left a
deep pit in the surface of the Earth. The Buttertubs, as this particular set of
sink holes is known, are a series of pits close to the narrow and precipitous
road that leads from Hawes to Muker. Readily accessible, they are a tourist
attraction for many motorists but few walkers.
It was a chill and windy
day when I approached these holes in the ground, grey clouds skimmed a pale
sun, and the gusty wind made waves through the long grass. At that time, the
pits were unfenced and entirely open to public gaze with none of the modern
obsessive concern for 'health and safety' rules. It was possible to step right
up to and, indeed, over, the edges of these shafts. I am uncomfortable with
heights and, since I was determined to gaze into the bottom of the largest and
deepest, I sank to my knees and crawled forward until I could safely peer into
the dim depths. As I did so, quite inexplicably, I was visited by a brief image
of a woman's body at the bottom and the question was posed in my writer's mind,
'What would you do if you found a dead body down there?'
That thought stayed with me
over the years. A divorce and remarriage took me to different parts of the
country and overseas for the first time. But I was drawn again and again to the
Yorkshire Dales until, almost on a whim, my wife and I with our new daughter
just 2 years old, moved into the area to live. Our walks became regular events,
regardless of weather. We experienced everything from dry thirsty heatwaves to
icy winters cloaked in deep drifting snow and everything in between, as can
only happen in good old island Britain.
It was whilst we lived in
this location that the initial question slowly coalesced into a plot, peopled
by the characters I had long lived with in my imagination. The story developed
and the setting became part of the narrative, as much a character in the tale
as Faith or Leigh, in fact. It was the natural setting for the rugged and tough
tale and the fact that I was living in it made the descriptions so much easier.
So, the first draft was completed at the same time as I renovated the house
we'd bought and worked part time for a local holiday accommodation company.
Life came along, in the
form of redundancy, just days before the new millennium was about to commence.
At the age of 51, I understood my chances of re-employment in the area were
slim and I moved the family back to my native East Yorkshire, where I found a
job. It was some years before I found time to write again and dug out that
first draft. I changed the viewpoint characters, giving both the male and
female protagonists a chance to have their say in first person. I changed
relationships that formed essential background to the story. I changed
incidents. I changed the ages of the protagonists. What I didn't change was the
setting. The Yorkshire Dales remained as valid a landscape as it had been from
the beginning.
For those who don't know
the area, it is a National Park. An area of outstanding natural beauty and
considered by many to be the best walking country in Europe. It's populated by
a native people who are as tough as the characteristic dry stone walls, as
stubborn as the local sheep, as different as individuals as are the inhabitants
of any region.
I changed the time frame
to a period that was historically real: the severe drought of 1976, since the
weather and the burgeoning philosophy of 'free love' allowed me to introduce a
degree of external nudity that would otherwise be unlikely in this wild
country. The nudity was an essential element in the relationship of the two
protagonists and a useful tool in examining the fight between innocence and
corruption that is at the heart of the story.
So, there you have it.
Those are the reasons I came to set my romantic thriller, Breaking Faith, in
one of the most beautiful parts of the English countryside. Many readers have
commented on how apt the setting is. Whether you'll agree or not can only be
determined by reading the book. And I give you the opportunity to do that for
free here on this blog. Each week of this year I am posting a chapter. There
are 50 in all, so it'll last for almost the whole year. And each post is
accompanied by one of my photographs taken in the Dales, so you can experience
the landscape for yourself. I started in January and the link to that first
instalment is here. You'll find the rest of the early chapters listed in
the archive and you're welcome to join the readers as we take the journey
together to the end.
4 comments:
I love the Dales, but love the lake District even more, which is why I've set 3 of my novels (so far!) in that beautiful corner of England.
I love the Dales, too, and the sink holes are great places for hiding dead bodies.
I also love my east Lancashire home which is why I've set my last 10 novels in the Pennines.
Ah, Paula, the Lakes; beautiful but a tendency to be wet! Still, I spent my honeymoon there, so they have a special place in my heart.
Lancashire, Shirley, that place just over the border, where, as it happens, my daughter is at university. Another county with some great features.
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