La maja desnuda (circa 1797–1800), known in English as The Naked (or Nude) Maja by Francisco de Goya (Photo credit: Wikipedia) |
Certain words/phrases can induce fairly specific responses in readers. As
writers, we all know this, but do we use the power of emotion in our work?
For the next few weeks, I’ll be looking at something subjective: how to
choose between emotional and intellectual words for effect.
In this series I’m looking at the difference between words that seem
intellectual as opposed to those that invoke a more emotional response. How you
use them is obviously up to you. The point is that the alternatives have the
same, or very similar, meanings, but their effect upon the reader can be
markedly different. I’ve made some suggestions here, but I’m sure you can think
of others.
Intellectual: Anecdote
Emotional: Joke/Story
At the company’s annual dinner, Gordon was full of anecdotes that were
intended to keep the audience laughing but which, unfortunately, sent many of
the to sleep in their soup. (formal)
Frank had a joke or a story for every situation and kept everyone in
stitches with his delivery. (informal)
Intellectual: Difficult
Emotional: Tough
We are navigating difficult waters in these times of economic uncertainty
and must remain alert for unseen hazards and barriers. (intellectual and
formal)
It’s been a tough few weeks, but we’ve got through it and now we can
start to improve again. (emotional, informal)
Intellectual: Nude
Emotional: Naked
There’s a theory that maintains that ‘nude’ is a voluntary state, whereas
‘naked’ is an imposed one. That may be true under certain circumstances, but I
don’t believe it to be universally the case. These are terms that can
frequently be interchanged, in fact. However, I’ll try to give examples of the
way they can be used differently.
Daphne worked as a life model and spent much of her time nude in front of
groups of art students and evening class attendees. (intellectual, formal)
Daphne slowly removed each item of clothing until she was entirely naked,
at which point, she stepped out of the trees, ran across the beach and plunged
into the sea. (emotional, informal)
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