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Some words/phrases can induce fairly specific responses in readers. As
writers, we all know this, but do we use the power of emotion in our work?
For these few weeks, I’m looking at something subjective: how to choose
between emotional and intellectual words for effect. You won’t always agree
with me, of course; you’re writers. But, hopefully, my suggestions will get the
thought processes going.
In this series I’m looking at the difference between words that seem
intellectual as opposed to those that evoke a more emotional response. How you
use them is obviously up to you. The point is that the alternatives have the
same, or very similar, meanings, but their effect upon the reader can be
markedly different. I’ve made some suggestions here, but I’m sure you can think
of others.
Intellectual: Completed
Emotional: Finished
The project was completed within three weeks, to the complete
satisfaction of the client.
‘I tell you, John; I’m finished with you: completely finished!’
Intellectual: Facilitate
Emotional: Ease
‘As independent marketers, we facilitate the promotion and sales of your
products, but only for a huge share of your profits.’
‘I can ease you into the right position,’ he said, lowering her to the
bed.
Intellectual: Humorous, Amusing
Emotional: Funny
‘Your report on the economy was highly amusing, George. But the only
responses you’ll receive will be either stark disbelief or downright
condemnation.’
‘That, George, was bloody funny. Had me laughing, all the way to the
bank.’
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