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Showing posts with label Recreation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Recreation. Show all posts

Saturday, 2 March 2013

Donkeys’ Years, by Michael Frayn, Reviewed.


First produced at London’s Globe Theatre in July 1976 (coincidentally the year in which my novel, Breaking Faith, is set, and a year of drought and heat wave in UK), this three act play is another demonstration of Frayn’s very British humour.

Although described simply as a play in three acts, this is much more like a farce, in the true British, dare I say English?, tradition. If not actually a farce, it could be taken as a parody of the style. It has all the ingredients: sexual misunderstandings, English sexual reserve, hypocrisy disguised as custom, bedrooms and, of course, the loss of clothes for the female and trousers for the male. I imagine the reader would have to become watcher in order to determine whether this is truly farce or the parody I suspect.

It is, of course, full of humour, poking fun at the stuffed shirts of academia, politicians and the servile subclass of those who serve such pretentions. There is much repetition, which, on the page can be a little wearying but on stage would work a treat, given good actors. The action is confined to a single location for each of the three acts and this serves to emphasise the claustrophobic and sheltered nature of the attitudes encapsulated by the cast. These are people who have no understanding of what most of us would call the ‘real world’. Privileged, spoilt and elevated beyond their natural abilities, they posture and pose their way through life completely unaware of the priorities faced by ordinary people outside their favoured circle.

The thread of lust, disguised as admiration until alcohol allows for honesty, permeates the play. The single female representative is the focus of all male attention, apart, of course, from that of the gay vicar (another stock character of English farce). There is little concern for the damage done to either lives or property by their barbs and actions. The level of achievement for most of the protagonists is well above their natural abilities and is an effective way of pointing out how birth and class can elevate beyond desert.

So, a social statement, but one so well submerged in humour that it may be missed by the less attentive. And the humour is brilliant. It had me laughing out loud and frequently, much to the distress of a fellow worker who shared the small room that serves as a temporary sanctuary from the busy and noisy office in which I perform my day job. The jokes come thick and fast, many derived from simple misunderstandings made clear to the audience but hidden from the characters.

I thoroughly enjoyed this play and would definitely attend a theatre for a performance.

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Friday, 4 November 2011

#NaNoWriMo Day 4 progress = total 16832 words

Managed 4 separate sessions today, turning out a little over 6,000 word to reach a total of 16,832 so far. So, well on target, which is just as well, as Mondays and Tuesdays are going to be much less productive.
I feel it's still going well, though the plot has taken a couple of unexpected turns, improving the story, I think. And a couple of characters have sneaked in rather earlier than I initially expected. But that's the beauty of working on a loose framework largely dictated by the way characters interact. It's more fun when you're not certain where the next chapter will take you.
I'm part way into chapter 6 now, and looking forward to another journey tomorrow. This NaNoWriMo challenge is proving more fun, and harder work, than I expected and I'm glad I decided to have a go this year.
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Saturday, 24 September 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Earnest

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Earnest: adjective – with serious intent, not trifling, ardent, intense, zealous; as a result of or a display of sincere conviction; weighty or important.

'Colin was so earnest in his pursuit of philately that one would think his life depended on his search for new stamps.'


24 September 1936 Jim Henson, the creator of the Muppets, was born – and one of his characters was, of course, called 'Earnie', a diminutive of 'Earnest'.

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Thursday, 23 June 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Epigraph


Epigraph: noun - superscription of a letter or book; imprint on a title page; an inscription on a tomb, building or statue; a legend on a coin; motto.

‘The grave of Spike Milligan bears an epigraph characteristic of the comic’s humour; “I told you I was ill”.’


Nothing suitable on Zemanta, so a picture from Crete, with absolutely no connection to the word defined.
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Wednesday, 15 June 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Compliment or complement

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Compliment or complement: A compliment is praise given to your lover in hopes of the rewards of love. You may complement a collection of objects by making it complete, or add an item to some others for the same reason.

‘Frank was apt to flirt with the girls and compliment them on their figures and appearance in the hope that they would favour him with, well, favours.’

‘Jesse brought in a bottle of Cabernet Sauvignon to complement the meal of roast beef.’ 

15 June 1996 – Central Manchester was bombed by Irish dissidents.
Another example, fortunately now well past, of idiots believing they can achieve their unpopular aims by terrorizing populations indiscriminately. Terrorists rarely actually achieve anything that couldn’t be better changed by normal, if slow, democratic processes. And when governments and journalists dress up the activity of such sociopaths by referring to mass murder as something other than what it is, they aid the terrorists.

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Friday, 27 May 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Daft


Horse Fair Lane
Daft: adjective - meek, humble, mild; lacking in intelligence, silly, stupid, reckless, wild.

‘I tell you, Donald, that politician is as daft as they come; I mean, expecting us to believe a word he says is as daft as a vicar standing stark naked in the pulpit and expounding on the virtues of modesty.’


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Wednesday, 25 May 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Cabin


High in the Yorkshire Dales
Cabin: noun - room or compartment in a ship, boat, spacecraft, lorry etc., for passengers, crew or cargo; berth in a ship; temporary shelter, a booth; a poor dwelling, small room, cell; natural cave or grotto, animal's den; litter for carrying someone; political cabinet – a collection of government appointees.

‘The lorry driver invited the lady of the night into his cabin but she declined, preferring the roomier accommodation available in the following Rolls.’

‘Jason was bragging to the attractive woman on the cruise that he was occupying an outside cabin, but this proved ineffective as a means of impressing her as she was housed in luxury suite, complete with a baby grand.’ 

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Monday, 23 May 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Bacchanalia

1st half of 17th centuryImage via Wikipedia
Bacchanalia: noun - Roman festival in honour of the god of wine, Bacchus; drunken revelry, an orgy.

‘If you go out on a stag night organised by Reginald, you’re likely to find yourself involved in a regular Bacchanalia with plenty of drink, stripagrams, wanton women and the lot.’

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Saturday, 14 May 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Affect or effect?

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Affect: verb - like to use, wear, practise, or frequent; seek or aim for; display ostentatiously; take the character of; take upon oneself to do, profess; of things: display a tendency towards; assume a false appearance of; pretend.
Effect: verb - bring about an end or result; accomplish an intention or wish; produce a state or condition;

Often confused. If you remember that the verb to affect is the one used, generally in a detrimental way, to describe someone who pretends to be something they are not. Whereas the verb to effect means to bring something about.

‘Paulina, who was shaped rather like a whale, liked to affect the mannerisms and dress, such as it was, of a lingerie supermodel.’

‘Nigel’s collection of model trains, his pedantic manner with language and his fashion sense all combined to effect a state of enforced bachelorhood, since no woman could abide his boring company.’

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Wednesday, 27 April 2011

Stuart’s Daily Word Spot: Macadam

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Macadam: adjective - from John Loudon McAdam (1756–1836), a British surveyor; of the kind of roadway laid down by McAdam; macadamized (tarmacadam) noun - material of which a macadamized road is formed.

‘Black and twisting, the macadam road snaked across the landscape, forming a barrier between the two sorts of ground it divided, with the uncultivated wilderness to the east and the tamed farmland to the west.’
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Saturday, 16 April 2011

Stuart’s Daily Word Spot: A while or Awhile

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A while: noun phrase – ‘The bathing beauties in their bikinis had to wait for a while until they heard the results of the contest from the judges.’

Awhile: adverb – ‘After the celebrations, the politicians who’d lost the election remained awhile, hoping the press pack would have dispersed before they emerged.’

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Tuesday, 29 March 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Nacelle

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Nacelle: noun - the basket of a balloon or car of an airship; streamlined bulge on an aircraft holding an engine; similarly shaped part of a motor vehicle.

‘Gloria gasped in horror as she watched the nacelle of the hot air balloon catch fire and set alight the canopy until the whole flying device was a falling ball of flame.’

‘Customising his SUV, Gordon covered the front end with multiple nacelles until it looked as if the vehicle had a bad dose of boils.’

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Monday, 28 February 2011

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Kaleidoscope

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Kaleidoscope: noun – a toy made of a tube containing mirrors and bits of coloured glass or paper which make constantly changing patterns of coloured reflections as the observer looks in and rotates the tube;  an ever-changing group of bright colours or coloured objects; something constantly shifting and changing:  verb - appear as in a kaleidoscope; move in a kaleidoscopic manner.

'Witnessing the struggles of the children emerging from the terror of imprisonment into the light and air of freedom sent a kaleidoscope of emotions through Sarah as she considered the dread they'd experienced turning to joy and exultation.'

'A fitful breeze made the multicoloured leaves of the New England trees, in the Fall, kaleidoscope as they twisted, turned and trembled in the ever-changing currents of air.'

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Sunday, 26 September 2010

Between or Among

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Away from all things computer at present. So, I’m keeping things going with scheduled blogs dealing with the language we use as writers. I hope you’ll forgive me if I don’t reply to any comments for the time being, but I’m having a very well-earned (yes, really!) rest from work for a couple of weeks.


When to use Between or Among.


between: involving members of a group, two items that are related, with shares to each, in the interval, (strictly speaking, if something is between two other things, it cannot also be one of those things – so, if the sentence is ‘Pick a number between 2 and 4.’ You actually have a choice of 3 only. If the writer or speaker intended to give you a choice of 2, 3, & 4, the sentence should be either, ‘Pick a number between 1 and 5.’ Or, ‘Pick a number from 2 to 4.’)  ‘Between the Devil and the deep blue sea, I know which I’d choose; and it wouldn't be that cold wet one.’


among: three or more things related, in the middle of.  (Again, strictly speaking, between should be used if referring to two items and among if describing three or more. However, language is organic and usage is allowing the two terms to become synonymous; not something I applaud, but something I accept as evidence of the laziness of most people when using language.)  ‘Among the four of us, Marilyn Monroe is by far the most beautiful.’
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Thursday, 17 June 2010

And the Query Letter has landed

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Well, to tell the truth, it's actually still here with me, since I've yet to complete the final edit. Though, as I'm now on chapter 31 of 68, it's going quite well and, now I'm no longer concentrating on the letter or synopsis, I should be able to move that process along at a rip-roaring speed. My writing group, the redoubtable Hornsea Writers, gave their usual unstinting aid last night and I think I now have a synopsis and query letter I can present with the first three chapters with some confidence. So, on with the work.
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